Agh, dammit. xD Okay, I'm going to write the story in parts, so this is only the first one.
Sorry for the incredibly weak plot, I was thinking about it, and it was 2 am, so meh... hahaha. I was more concentrating on the characters. Actually, that didn't really work, but I'll have to fix them in the next part.
So if you hate your character immensely, xD just tell me what you want me to change, and I will. I mostly fit the characters in the story and didn't give them particular personalities, so that's my bad.
You guys should try writing one, I'm betting you could do a million times better than me, hehehe. It's fun to write, though... so yeah.
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Sneaks. That’s what she’d called them. Sneaks. The nerve of it! So they’d been spying on some random guy. It was her fault, anyway. If she’d have let them in the building, they wouldn’t have had to spy.
The group met the next day to plan their course of action. They had to get inside the building without being recognised. Christine suggested fake moustaches. The others nodded briefly, and then pointed out that they’d probably be slightly more noticeable with moustaches, and continued planning. Mari, of course, took charge and decided that they had to split up to enter the building undetected. They wondered if security could identify them individually, and decided to take extra precautions. Leesha was an expert at sneaking around. She had everything they needed to make them unrecognisable.
It was decided that one of them had to walk through the front entrance and address the evil secretary. They chose Nelly without hesitance, because it was likely she’d keep a straighter face than the others when lying. At least, they hoped.
Several hours later, after much effective disguising, they could hardly tell who was who themselves. They took that as a good sign, and headed towards the building, equipment in hand.
Christine went around the other side of the block, to enter from the fire exit. Leesha and Mari took the side doors, where they knew security was stationed throughout the day. They hoped they could make it past them without too much trouble.
Nelly started walking towards the front door, heart pounding, willing security to be distracted, as planned. She entered the air-conditioned building and headed to the secretary’s desk, where she’d seen it blueprinted on Leesha’s hand-drawn map of the place.
The older-looking woman glanced up, startled, but narrowed her eyes upon seeing Nelly.
“Not you again… didn’t I tell you to stay away?”
Nelly froze. “You—you can see through my disguise?”
The secretary’s eyes narrowed further. “You’re wearing a hat.”
Uh oh. “Please, please, just let us through? We just want to have a look around!” Nelly saw no point in lying, they’d been discovered. All that there was left to do was plead and bargain. At least, until Christine came down the hallway.
“Two security guards down,” she said brightly. “Leesh and Mari can deal with the others. Oh—” she glanced at the secretary, immediately knowing they’d been caught. She grabbed something out of her bag and Nelly knew what it would be before Christine stunned the woman with the taser. She slumped to the floor.
Before either of them could say anything, they heard footsteps behind them. Leesha and Mari stared at the unconscious secretary. “Not again…” they both said in unison.
“What?” asked Christine.
They’d entered the elevator and used it to get to the second floor. They agreed this was where the boxes had been taken.
After almost thirty seconds upon stepping on the tiled floor outside the elevator, a man walked up to them, his face indifferent, but he appeared angry… maybe even cruel.
“Uhhh…” Nelly stammered.
“Run!” Leesha shrieked. They all scattered, splitting up in different directions, screaming and bolting around the hallway. Eventually, they were all caught by several security guards, and were brought back to the man, struggling.
“Must… stun… people…” Christine muttered, trying to reach her bag. A guard grabbed it and flung it across the room. “Dammit all!” She sighed.
Mari scowled. “Let us go, would you?”
The man smirked and shook his head. “So that you can run away and come back later? No, I think it’d be better to call the police this time.”
They glanced at each other, eyes widened.
“We were doing anything, really!” Nelly tried to assure him. “We were just—”
“Trespassing and attacking people!” the man finished.
“Well, in our defence,” Christine started to say, “you’re all a bunch of hypocrites.”
The man raised an eyebrow. “What?”
“Well, you’re spying on people too, aren’t you? That’s what this business is about, right? Spying?”
He frowned briefly, obviously confused. “We make computers.”
“So then why,” said Mari, “did we see you guys carry in a bunch of boxes in the middle of the night? Spy equipment?”
“No…” the man said slowly, obviously pitying their lack of judgment, “computer equipment.”
There was a moment of silence. “Err…” Leesha mumbled.
“OMIGOD!” Shouted Nelly. “LOOK!” She pointed in a random direction, and the guards and creepy guy turned around to see. The four of them struggled away and sprinted for the elevator.
They got in just in time, and the guards missed them by a fraction of a second. Christine pressed the button for level three.
“What the—?” Mari said. “Aren’t we leaving now?”
“I think they’re lying,” Christine replied. “Computer equipment? Yeah, right!”
The others exchanged glances.
“I agree,” Leesha spoke up. “We should probably look around…”
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Ah, this is pathetic. I'm sorry. xD It's actually pretty funny how terrible I managed to make it. Sigh. I'm seriously doubting my future in writing at the moment, hahaha... how sad... xP
Oh well. Hopefully I can fix the story in the next chapter. Unless you'd rather not read any more (probably wise).
Hehehe, sorry again, guys. Cya.
<3 <3 <3
~Sammy
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xo hi hi xo
Mind if I write a part to the story?
I will anyway.
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Leesha finished saying why they should look around. Mari turned around. Two of guys guys spotted them.
"Ah, shoot!" Mari said. She quickly grabbed Christines bag. She put the tazer in her huge coat pocket.
"Why are you- Christine turned around in mid-sentence. She spotted the guys and nodded letting Mari know that she knew her plan.
Instead of stuggling Mari let one guy overtake her. While the other guy was chasing christine, the elevator opened.
Leesha and Nelly (possibly Kim, is she in this?) stood there wondering if they should leave.
Mari made the decision for them. "Go." She said. The guy still hadn't noticed her hidden tazer. Nelly and Leesha shook their heads no. "Go!" They still stood there. "GO!" They finally got into the elevator.
When the door closed Mari brought the tazer out. She shocked the guy who was holding her and the guy who was chasing christine.
Christine smiled. "Fun, isn't it?"
Mari laughed and nodded.
Mari grabbed the walkie-talkie on one guys hip. Christine did the same.
Christine repressed the elevator button.
Mari stood lookout. She heard footsteps. She saw one guy coming around the corner. She threw the tazer at him. It hit him. She ran and got the tazer and his walkie-talkie.
Christine took back her tazer and Mari took the walkie-talkie she had been holding.
Again Mari heard footsteps. This time christine ran and hid. When the guy spotted Mari he started chasing her. Christine jumped out and shocked him.
Mari jumped into the elevator and held it open.
Christine took the last guys walkie-talkie and gave it to Mari. She pressed 3rd FLOOR on the button pad.
Leesha and Nelly were waiting for them.
"Mari tazed a guy" Christine laughed.
"Yea, yea" Mari said. She handed them all walkie-talkies.
They walked as soft as they could. They reached the room with the boxes.
All was silent.
"Um. Hi there Tomson. We have around three guys dead here, where are you?" Leeshas walkie-talkie said.
"oh my god!" She said softly. Mari grabbed it and gave it to Nelly.
"Impression of a musky 34 year old." Mari said.
Nelly cleared her throat. "Uh, hi. Im on the first floor. My tracker is broken so if you can't see me on the little TV screen map then that's why. I don't know anything about those dead guys. Ill check it out."
"You're good!" Mari mouthed.
"Not really!" Nelly mouthed back.
"Can I meet you there?" The voice said over talkie.
"Say yes!" Mari mouthed reaching for Leeshas bag. "Ill be back!"
Mari walked to all three dead guys. She had 20 minutes. She walked over all of them and peered at the name-tags. She found Tomson and took of his uniform shirt. (Luckily they were both wearing jeans that were too big for them).
She slipped it on. She clipped the name tag on.
The next move she did would haunt her. But if she didn't? She didn't think about it.
She brought out Leeshas super huge scissors. She raised it to her bundled hair. She snipped. She put Tomsons hat on and his black loaffers. (Waaaaaaaay to big for her.)She removed her makeup and put the walkie-talkie at her side.
After that she quickly hid them(the dead guys) in one stall in the girls bathroom. She locked the door and threw the key down the sink of the bubbler.
"Hey, Tomson!"
Mari turned around. "Right here!" She said in her best impesonation.
"C'mon, Mari just act like a guy for a few minutes split up and go find the girls" She tought to herself. She had never been so scared.
"So. Where are the bodies?" She asked. (again in her impersonation)
"I don't know" He said. He seemed to be Mari's age.
"Okayyyyy" Mari said. She felt like he was seeing through her. She suddenly felt tingles up her back. "No not now! I can't like a guy who's trying to hunt me down!" She thought.
He lifted up his hat, letting her see his great features better. "Lets check out the Third floor, they're probably looking for the boxes."
"Oh shoot" Mari thought. How would she get out of this?
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I know most of it invloves me. Sorry!
How'd you like the other story I wrote in mii other comment? (on the post where you had the story about Brooke) I wrote a lot for it.
Writing is fun!
xo bi bi xo
P.S this is mari!
xo hi hi xo
Mind if I write a part to the story?
I will anyway.
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Leesha finished saying why they should look around. Mari turned around. Two of guys guys spotted them.
"Ah, shoot!" Mari said. She quickly grabbed Christines bag. She put the tazer in her huge coat pocket.
"Why are you- Christine turned around in mid-sentence. She spotted the guys and nodded letting Mari know that she knew her plan.
Instead of stuggling Mari let one guy overtake her. While the other guy was chasing christine, the elevator opened.
Leesha and Nelly (possibly Kim, is she in this?) stood there wondering if they should leave.
Mari made the decision for them. "Go." She said. The guy still hadn't noticed her hidden tazer. Nelly and Leesha shook their heads no. "Go!" They still stood there. "GO!" They finally got into the elevator.
When the door closed Mari brought the tazer out. She shocked the guy who was holding her and the guy who was chasing christine.
Christine smiled. "Fun, isn't it?"
Mari laughed and nodded.
Mari grabbed the walkie-talkie on one guys hip. Christine did the same.
Christine repressed the elevator button.
Mari stood lookout. She heard footsteps. She saw one guy coming around the corner. She threw the tazer at him. It hit him. She ran and got the tazer and his walkie-talkie.
Christine took back her tazer and Mari took the walkie-talkie she had been holding.
Again Mari heard footsteps. This time christine ran and hid. When the guy spotted Mari he started chasing her. Christine jumped out and shocked him.
Mari jumped into the elevator and held it open.
Christine took the last guys walkie-talkie and gave it to Mari. She pressed 3rd FLOOR on the button pad.
Leesha and Nelly were waiting for them.
"Mari tazed a guy" Christine laughed.
"Yea, yea" Mari said. She handed them all walkie-talkies.
They walked as soft as they could. They reached the room with the boxes.
All was silent.
"Um. Hi there Tomson. We have around three guys dead here, where are you?" Leeshas walkie-talkie said.
"oh my god!" She said softly. Mari grabbed it and gave it to Nelly.
"Impression of a musky 34 year old." Mari said.
Nelly cleared her throat. "Uh, hi. Im on the first floor. My tracker is broken so if you can't see me on the little TV screen map then that's why. I don't know anything about those dead guys. Ill check it out."
"You're good!" Mari mouthed.
"Not really!" Nelly mouthed back.
"Can I meet you there?" The voice said over talkie.
"Say yes!" Mari mouthed reaching for Leeshas bag. "Ill be back!"
Mari walked to all three dead guys. She had 20 minutes. She walked over all of them and peered at the name-tags. She found Tomson and took of his uniform shirt. (Luckily they were both wearing jeans that were too big for them).
She slipped it on. She clipped the name tag on.
The next move she did would haunt her. But if she didn't? She didn't think about it.
She brought out Leeshas super huge scissors. She raised it to her bundled hair. She snipped. She put Tomsons hat on and his black loaffers. (Waaaaaaaay to big for her.)She removed her makeup and put the walkie-talkie at her side.
After that she quickly hid them(the dead guys) in one stall in the girls bathroom. She locked the door and threw the key down the sink of the bubbler.
"Hey, Tomson!"
Mari turned around. "Right here!" She said in her best impesonation.
"C'mon, Mari just act like a guy for a few minutes split up and go find the girls" She tought to herself. She had never been so scared.
"So. Where are the bodies?" She asked. (again in her impersonation)
"I don't know" He said. He seemed to be Mari's age.
"Okayyyyy" Mari said. She felt like he was seeing through her. She suddenly felt tingles up her back. "No not now! I can't like a guy who's trying to hunt me down!" She thought.
He lifted up his hat, letting her see his great features better. "Lets check out the Third floor, they're probably looking for the boxes."
"Oh shoot" Mari thought. How would she get out of this?
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I know most of it invloves me. Sorry!
How'd you like the other story I wrote in mii other comment? (on the post where you had the story about Brooke) I wrote a lot for it.
Writing is fun!
xo bi bi xo
P.S this is mari!
YAY the story has been started!!
=]
i like it so far!! =]
hehe woo! TAZER!! i want one...where do you think i can get one from??
haha i really like how you wrote me it really seems like me
gosh your talented!!
hmm when i think of an idea i'll try and write a story.
=]
xxo
xo hi hi xo
Heyy christine, Leesh, and PF? How do you guys like the part I wrote huh?
Do yoyu like it sam? Will you add it to the story?
Pleeeeaaaasssseeee?
xo bi bi xo
P.S Mari again!
OH I LOVE!! lmfao where did you get that sneaking around part from lol. wouldnt have gotten that from my evil plan now would you!!? haha!
oh and mari! i love also =]
xx
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